crit panel: their comments
Friday, November 11th, 2005i did my presentation last thursday… hmm.. here are their comments:
negative/neutral comments:
1. poor drawings
2. design too idealistic, symmetrical, rigid
3. need to rethink about what’s being learnt in the process of trying to put a circular plan within a rectangular site
"a circular plan need not necessarily make use of the circle as a whole, instead we can attempt to suggest the use of the circle by using just a portion of the circle…"
4. too many ideas packed within the small space and not carefully distinguished
Positive comments:
1. Good consideration of the site and neighbouring buildings
2. Interesting attempt trying to show spatial fluidity
3. Appreciates the careful consideration of respecting nature, climate and the neighbours
4. intense designer
1st floor plan:
2nd floor plan:


